The Lichfield Ice Cream King

Finally in Beta!

The second draft has been completed on my next novel, The Lichfield Ice Cream King and is available to Beta read now. This is the completion of the story I wrote for NaNoWriMo in 2017 and comes in at just over 74,000 words.

If anyone is interested in reading this for me, please get in touch. You can Beta read this over at Betareader.io (link below), which gives you the ability to make comments and suggestions, right there in the manuscript!

https://read.betareader.io/discover/5c36192b2557ce001d69d3a2

I'm currently having this professionally read, so will incorporate their feedback and any feedback from other readers.

Happy reading
Paul

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